Perfect! I love red violets and the blue roses.

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Great job! Gorgeous! (There's a blue rose symbolic sort of thing on this gothic-christian web site I visit sometimes. I wonder if it has the same symbol for her?)

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Look and think before opening the shutter. The heart and mind are the true lens of the camera.

- Yousuf Karsh

I'm not good with the critic thing. So here it goes; it flows well from pictures to words, and I like the roses, but I think the words jump too fast. That is all I care to have changed.

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What can I say that hasn't been said before..

dont you dare change a thing!
and dont you listen to luce
she doesnt know what shes talking bout
its perfect
and love the flip on roses are red
roses are blue
simbolic all on their own
[let the blue roses be sighted forever
and ever]
(no never here)

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something wakes you in the night
you startle awake
hardly ever being woken when its still dark out
you instantly grow suspicious
looking every which way
you stumble to the kitchen
nothing
the noise sounds agian
you stumble to the living room
nothing
the noise is growing louder
you stumble outside
where the cold nibbles at your bare flesh
the noise sounds again
loudly
you stumble to a pin
you glare at something moving in it
"I wonder if rooster taste the same as chicken?"

She only requested a simple chage in the timing. I don't hink she wants me to remove the phrase altogether. And even if she did, I'd do it... it's her avvie after all, however it may be your idea. *shrug*

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- Time traveller dies tragically. (1967 - 1608)

oh, and thanks for the fav

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- Time traveller dies tragically. (1967 - 1608)

'for me and for you.'

How about that, instead? Add the word, 'for' in that poem? Wonderful color, Bassem, in that blue rose. Nicely done!

vio-lets-are-red // 4 syllables
ro-ses-are-blue // 4 syllables

that's-how-it-is // 4 syllables
for-me-and-you // 4 syllables

I kept the syllable count consistent on both lines. Adding another "for" would make it irregular.

Thanks for the suggestion, though!

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- Time traveller dies tragically. (1967 - 1608)

*grin* Babe...there's such a thing as sound. I ain't countin' measures here.

I repeated that poem aloud. And that's what I heard.

I ain't gonna get into a counting contest witcha. *grin* I rarely create poems by count. That's jus me. You be you, k? *grin*

Thanks for the feedback, Bassem. I still love that color blue.

Heather